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Hatred because of all the things she hasn't forgiven me for.

Sorrow because she won't forgive me for the things that I did.

 

Lust because I cannot seem to love her anymore.

 

Gratitude for all the things she has done for me over the years.

 

Lonely because I can't talk to her.

 

Depression because I still have to endure her face every weekday.

 

Glad because I have honest friends to talk to about her.

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  • EndlessNameless
    April 2

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    very nice write. i can feel your honesty, your feelings in this. i like the title because it's different, and i liked it because you made a list of what's going on.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    March 29

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    mmmmmm..... nic vent if you throw some curve balls behind this i can assure you that this poem is explosive i see my choc been bye to that is a plus + cheers


  • hotchocolate gold member
    March 27

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    This is good hon I'm glad you got your feelings out on this. I enjoyed this read