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Undulate

Whatever happened to the simple things
i can't even see the sun set anymore
days are filled with words which really could be left unsaid
but we say them anyway

its been one year 
since i came into this world
with bright blue eyes and nothing to lose
and things are different now
i never thought that people could change so much
but they can and
they have

i should have known that soil can only ever be dirt
and that i will only ever be me
but i thought i could be different
i thought i could change
now i now the truth

i left innocence at the red lights and jaywalked away
there was no need for tears or fears or me
i thought about leaving for a while
but then i realized that i'm already lost

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  • whiterabbit.
    June 28
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    I love this. It's amazing and the emotions are so powerful.

    "i never thought that people could change so much
    but they can and
    they have"
    ^^^^That is too true. I love the way that you've worded it.

    "i should have known that soil can only ever be dirt"
    ^^^^eeep, the way you write is brilliant.

    I can really feel this and relate to a lot of the thoughts here.
    This is amazing.