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Steve's Eyes

Sapphire waves of air behind
floats in my timeless glass
his seductive yawning eyes
I could feel its thick breathe
burning the pupils of my eyes
So it I turned them away
To the man who tries to stare
But I can’t I’m loving him
But his eyes is too intense
For this daisy-like eyes
His heart is too near
His eyes shatter my soul
For our true love
Must be the one that shatters
A lover’s soul
So before he picks up the axe
To the only heart I have
I stop this movement
As gorgeous love sits above
Shimmers cherry hair
as she tries to heave
Some iridescent gold ingots sand
of lovely feelings
Beckoning me
Trying me

So sad and it hurts so
Because I can’t enjoy me
His eyes aren’t so kind to mine
They lurks with claws on me
Deep enough to captivate my heart
That could be somewhat of a nightmare
And there it shall cry
Waking up in agony’s deadly respire
There I can’t think in that terra firma
Where all is midnight and
There is the star to the right
Is where I shall look in to finds way?
To be excited to light my heart
Is that what I want?
So sweet and gentle he seems
To be innocent in his tone
And words
But I’m afraid because
Your eyes seek in mines
As If I’m inside you
And you’re in mine
And there is where
I want to explore the depth
Of what you hold

So must I turn away?



Conversed and look every back often
I’m sorry for only a genius
Knows the words is as important
As the melody
I want to see every detail

But he’s not allowing me to
As if he already knows
For all I get is
“We should have sex?”

I turn back little bit longer
there I am again

Sapphire waves of air behind
floats in my timeless glass
"Ok!"

Turning back no
"no I say."
















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