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I Drink Of You

Her beauty lies in dark of night
it flows through her veins
When a vampire takes flight
her blood flows like the rains

Ebon hair on paled skin
she stares with cold dead eyes
I will come back here again
to the coffin where she lies

I dance with the living dead
in the after life
I dined on the blood she bled
She is a demons wife

Love found in the shadows hue
where the seed of evils sewn
A vampiress she turned into
never to be alone











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  • ennovy silver member
    March 17
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    Darkly written...very vivid...thank you for entering our contest....novy & brazos

  • xVamPirexMusiCx
    March 9
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    I love vampires! They simply amaze me (I wish I was a vampire ;D) bbeesstt of luck!!


  • Abstract Image
    March 7

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    Beautiful poem you have here. You hit my weak spot...love for vampires and it's strange that i do love them because my nickname for him is Vampire...thanks for entering.


  • XxAmongtheBrokenxX
    March 2

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    Ooh, wonderfully morbid. I love it. Nicely written! Although, I think that a little punctuation might help it flow even better, but even without it, its great. Thanks for entering and good luck!