Apathy squared
by armoured hearts,
circular hearths most safely guarded
from above by light unchartered.
Protect and love
your essence owned,
Contamination quickly drowned
in seas of peace and answers found.
Keep only yours
inside your core,
carry not what isn't needed
help, don't hold what others heeded.
Trust in all that
has provided
Thanks are for our giving guide
for this earth and for this light.
A contest entry
- Impress me-Options if you Dare by Violet Moodswing.
1050 points, ended April 20, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Loved that ending, powerful.
Congrats,
mj.
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Great read, congrats on the trophy
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What a great Sunday this is. So much good poetry this day must be blessed with the skills of so many poets.
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Beautiful. I love the description you put into this. I can tell it's well- thought out. You got an emotion across very nicely.
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Wow, very good, I enjoyed it!.
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very nicely written work you have here... Congrats on the trophy and it is a pleasant read. Thanks for sharing this withus.
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This write is welll worth reading. I too feel that this write neds more commnts. I t is a worthy write well worth the time to read. Well done.
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very nice
it is very touching, -
Wow, hard to believe that you havent had any comments on this piece yet. It is really quite beautiful. It reads well aloud too. For me it rings clearly of love, letting go and finding peace within ones own spirit.
Loved it. Thanks for entering
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