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The Problem



  She spit
  daggers
  from her
  mouth

  The problem
  is that they
  had my name
  engraved on
  them.

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  • shattered.frisco
    October 20
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    oh shit! that was........fucking intense...wow


  • Katilina
    March 3

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    I love short, pithy, to the point kind of poems. I love the SHARP end to this poem. It has a lot of witty sarcasm to it obviously. Your poem is all the rage! I love it!


  • Tqop
    March 3
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    Interesting.......

    You would have to explain this one for me mate.
    But it sounds good though.