Love, sweet love the key to my heart,
a passionate feeling no doubt.
Deep in my soul we had to part,
Love, sweet love the key to my heart.
Try once more for a fresh new start,
over mountains and clear blue sea.
Love, sweet love the key to my heart,
so please don't ever forget me.
© March 2, 2009
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An attempt at Triolet.
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Wow, after all that, you say, "so please don't ever forget me?" There is everything worth remembering in the lines pevious to that. Lovely work, immense
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Thank you very much for your kind and generous words.
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splendid!
Try once more for a fresh new start," very nice...Love ever begins and increases. It never extinguishes. Fine poem song with sweet flow, dear friend
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Thank you, dear.
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A good attempt by what i see- welldone and i like your picture ;-) xx
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Thank you.
You're on a roll.
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BEAUTIFUL
Your words flow like a beautiful soft love song with the beat of longing and love...so please dont ever forget me...I found this very enjoyable and dancing around in my head with a little beat
thank you for sharing with me this morning.
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Thank you for reading. I am happy that you enjoyed it. I really need to pull my knight and ladies pieces out. Wait, maybe it's highlander piece I have, hmm, anyway. Thanks again.
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Very nice!!! I like the ryhme and rythem and it flows quite nicely.
Love the picture too.
Another awesome job as always.
Robert
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Thank you, dear.
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