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Aren't You Proud

No preistly man's
Going to save us now
So here's one for the ocean
And one for the song
And one for us

Cat scratch claws
Rip down our throat
I'm sorry to dissapoint
I guess we said fuck it
One too many times

One of us will fall
And one will clean
The ashes off their mind
Controlled explosion
In the passing of you

Night time blur
I'm gonna go for a run
To the place where I
Don't have to fight
Where I can be gone

You're not helping me
So just leave me alone
I'm not gonna fight
Please don't go
So are you proud now?

Turn off the light
So you don't see
What you've become
But don't think twice
We'll play along

They fucked with our head
But now they'll see
These burns they'll show
Every last thing
You thought I would be

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  • Velvet Rose Petals
    March 2
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    wow.. That was really interesting. Very nice write. Good luck!
    Rose