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Outline: Neco

Outline: Neco

Chapter 1:  Bonfire
Tiyet lying on the floor half dead describe the injuries.
Guard’s torment
Unfocused memories
  Enter the Doctor
  River of Blood
  Led through the crowd
Cold Rulers
Worse kind of traitor
Burning down the town

Chapter 2: Wake Up
Floating down the river
  Washed ashore
  Wake up sleepy head
  Confused
  What do we do now
  A brief description of what you are now.
  Scared of the hierarchy
  Left in the woods
  Sleeping in the trees
  Bad dreams
  Unexpected alarm clock
  Possible friend  (Terra)
    Saved at last?
    Saviors or enemies
    New role and new friends

Chapter 3: The Ropes

    Shopping with Sasha       
Seeing the city
The dead eat and sleep
  King of the dead
Stranger than I thought (Tiyet)     
    The perfect weapon
Spells of ownership
Atriums The benefactor
  A new home
Exploring
Figuring things out
  Trying hard to remember
  New Schedule
Lets see how much you know
Magic Lessons
Lessons on blending in
Exploring
Tidus the guide
OPPS, I’m drunk
Looks like trouble


Chapter 4: Now,  What did We Learn?

Fight, Fight!
Attracting unwanted attention
The King Himself
In the company of death himself.
Inquisition
Dinner with a king
Unwanted room
Trapped
Playing coy
Learning to fly
Lecture after lecture
Being sneaky


Chapter 5: Spying and Trying

More Lectures
Loop Hole
  Falling into a routine
Sneaking out after dark
Isolated
Exploring
Too touchy feely for me
  Playing innocent and learning to lie
Meeting Phyrious 


Chapter 6: Killing the Conscious

Preparing for a mission
Sleeping in my own bed again
  More dreams
Meeting the crew
  Explaining the details
Going into the unknown dressed like an idiot
First death
Last thought and last words
Being invisible
Running away
Meeting the enemy
First confrontation
Little girl

Chapter 7:  Coming to Terms

Hiding out
Phyrious’s story
Coming to terms
  Under lock and key
Forced companion
  One mad King
More bad dreams but at least a name Tautianna
Controlling and maddening
Sasha’s smooth moves
The Oracle’s laws
Complications?
Phyrious’s jealousy
Plain Sasha
Learning a secret from an unusual source

Chapter 8:  Here We go Again
Going through the motions
Jumped
Fighting Again
Hurt
A New Acquaintance
Sasha’s little secret
The Healer
Real Pain
Disobeying summons
The sympathetic guard
Consequence
Sentenced


Chapter 9: Unexpected

Misery
The door slammed shut
  Defiance
  Saved by Phyrious
Apprentice
The real work begins
Summons that can not be refused
Neco’s regret
Cold shoulder
Simi Freedom
New Job
Permanent enemy

Chapter 10: Rude Awaking

First Test
Stalking Demons
Ambushed
  Shocked
Fighting  for dear life
Dead sister walking
Fight or Fright
  Battle for Neco Begins


Chapter 11: When all Hell Goes to War…..

Fighting  into the City
Confronted
Death’s true form
Annulations
War to end all wars
Trapping the snake
Barely Saving Our Asses


Chapter 12:  Chaos, Blood Shed, And Devils OH MY!

Regrouping
Preparing for war
  Complicated kisses
  Death of the underdog
Three sided war

Chapter 13: To Die Again

Battle for mortals
Complicated choices
Killing all I hold Sacred
Suicide
Raining down fire

Chapter 14:

The Oracle’s  story
  Rising again
Turmoil
  Coming to a close


The End

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  • sounds --

    like a novel being born--------------


  • xeroabyss II
    March 10

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    "The dead eat and sleep" and
    "Going into the unknown dressed like an idiot", those two intrest me a lot

  • This was such a good outline for what sounds likea fabulous story!!! Is it actually written?