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Twisted Nursery Rhyme.

Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water
But Jack had another plans
And that night Jill’s innocence
Would go to market to be slaughtered

Jack went down
But Jill was the one who lost her crown
She’s tried to resist
But his body tumbled all over.

Up Jack got and home he ran
As Jill fought back the bile
She cried and cried on the ground
As she thought of his sick smile

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