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One Love

Could this have ended any other way
Was this what was meant to be
That day you left and moved away

You promised I'd always be your number one love
Now your coming back with another one
You said you'd never leave my side
Yet since you told me I have just wanted to cry

When you told me you slept in his bed
My heart stopped so fast I thought I was dead
You have no idea how much you meant to me
You have no idea how much our relationship could be

Now you just a memory
You'll never be what we could have been
You'll soon be forgotten with the rest of them
Good bye forever my one love for I can never forgive what you have done

Author notes

I had a girl Friend who moved away but we always wanted to get back together and always visited each other and it felt like we were meant to be apparently not. Idk just a random Poem I wrote trying to express how I feel now. Not sure how good it is I write to help me hope you enjoy though.

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
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Comments

  • Aw, I'm sorry about your girlfriend. At least you have the rest of your life to find "the one". Anyway, I really like this. Thanks so much for entering!

  • kdom
    March 2

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    the 1st line enticed me to read, very good.

    just a couple grammatical notes:
    2nd line in 2nd stanza should be you're
    1st line in last stanza should you be you're instead?