What do they see?
You know, when they look at me,
Am I beautiful or am I ugly,
Should I be conserned on what they think,
Or do they even judge ice rinks,
When I see people I look,
Deep inside, are they interested in books,
What about there personality,
Are they ugly,
On the inside maybe,
On the outside not,
I wouldn't even judge someone if they ate snot,
Who am I to judge what their not?
I wish the world can be this way,
Not how things are today.
A contest entry
- Not All Beauty is Colorful by XxAmongtheBrokenxX.
430 points, ended March 2, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you think it was good? I am only 11.
Comments
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Hey little kid,
You have chosen a theme that is too much for your age and you have done a brilliant job here... it shows how insightful you are... Wish you to write more and more... keep writing
Love and regards
Kiddy -
Very good. I especially like the last few lines.
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I think this is very good!
And it's true as well. Isn't it a shame that us kids have to grow up in such a shallow world? Anyway, thank you for entering the contest and good luck!
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