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Seasons

I wish you summer's kiss never withdrawn
and beauty of winter in no ways gone
for a life full of renewal of springtime
with sweet autumn color changes sublime

Let no darkness be part of your seasons
as together you both share life's reasons

 

 

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  • penman gold member
    March 3
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    Wonderful

    A very touching and well expressed write. Best off luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    March 3

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    aw wow this a very beautiful poem I love your imagery and depth throughout good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    March 3

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    You have captured the mood and the seasons turning
    a beautiful write
    best wishes and good luck
    Julie

  • Thanks mark.....this is a very nice wish for us....great poem....and thanks for being my best man!
    Michael

  • omg you've made me weep here this is wonderful and i love it so much, thank you for this beautiful wish ~Luce


  • Cannonsfire
    March 2

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    Oh hun this almost made me cry This is so lovely and I just know both of them will love it so much. You are a wonderful friend and mentor to her C

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