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scattered

took my baby for a streetlight in a blizzard,
when really my baby was the snow.
and as i watched him falling to the pavement,
i knew that i could never let him go.
and as i watched him melting on the sidewalks,
splashing into puddles on the lawn,
i felt as though id never been without him
and i knew that i would die when he was gone.

took my baby for an awning in a rainstorm,
when really my baby was the rain,
and as i watched him dripping from the rooftops,
i knew that all my longing was in vain.
and as i watched my baby burst in droplets
scattered there by all the passing cars,
i knew that i could never live without him
i knew he'd be the one to break my heart.

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  • sinkfloridasink
    April 28, 2009

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    wow. this was beautiful really good,
    "when really my baby was the rain,
    and as i watched him dripping from the rooftops,
    i knew that all my longing was in vain." That part was really awesome

  • FallingRainDrop
    March 2, 2009

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    wow this is simply amazing. its not like anything that ive ever read before, its different and i love that. everything about this poem is just really good. your talent is amazing :] dont ever stop writting