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Shattering of sky colors

A bright purple - cerulean twilight
shattered into shards of metalic colors.

breaking off from the rainbow
of yesterday's rain that dotted
  the clouds of an early sunset.


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  • sideways hourglass
    March 21

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    Fantastic imagery - but I am struggling to find its meaning and emotional foundation. Still, this is lovely.