Fare thee well my love,
Please reunite with me soon.
I stay in this all white gown just to show;
you still live on.
You are somewhere, here
Near me.
Not in flesh, but in spirit
None others can take thy place
O, lo....my lover's voice,
it haunts me phantomwise.
And let it be known this,
no man shall take his place ;
upon this shelf.
Death to the man that tries to take this lovely virgin widow,
and her hand in blasphemous marrige.
To hell with them, I speak it true!
Take what this waste away;
if thee prove'st thy love is not false,
he and I are still together for all the days;
whether he is not here, or waiting for me in the great white
O, Gods....help me return to him once more.
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A contest entry
- THE LONELY SWAN by Swan song.
800 points, ended March 5, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Anything in need of a tweak in this peice?
Comments
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Very nice and heart felt
Thank you for your entry
it haunts me phantomwise.
And let it be known this,
no man shall take his place ;
upon this shelf.
This was my favorite art of your poem Well done!
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What a lovely tale woven dear Fips...loev how you said it...Keep the talent brewing..
All the very best inthe contest dear
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