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[ And as your world spins out of control ]

And as your world spins out of control
and shatters to pieces impossible to hold
        on to any longer..

I'll spend eternity piecing every single one
back together even if it kills me to get it done
        because i love you so much..

Perfection in human form is what i see
and definitely something I could not be
        but lucky to have found you..

Death is more pleasing than losing you would ever feel
and nothing in this world could help me heal
        I would quickly follow you into the dark..

♥ I love you ♥
-Kaela

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  • Virgoan
    October 10

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    A poem that shows how young you are and how young your heart. Poem like this is the one that when think of in ten years will put a smile on our faces with a question: am i really that emotionally attached? stricken?

    Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.

    Regards,

    Hensley


  • Hope Angel silver member
    March 2

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    Awww sissy this is really sweet. Whoever this is about is lucky to have you in their life. I love you lots.