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vampire kiss, freeewritee

vampire kiss
the blood runs down my cheek
I need this
your stealing my innocence
but baby this poisons so sweet.

Tattered and torn
is my shirt by your claws
Forgive me
for moaning
but I'm loving it all.

Your dark and I'm light
I'm day and your night
My friends, my family
they'd never approve
But tonight, evil feels so right.

So marry me, murder me
whichever is your pleasure
just please, oh please
make your poison
last forever.

Author notes

this poem isn't actually about a vampire kiss haha
even thought that was what the free write was called

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • yay i like this :] last stanza is great, and i love the dark light, day night part that reminds me of hot n cold hahaha.
    very nice my love