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Crying red

pillagree of thorns traps me in my room
dark, cold and fearing company unknown
shattered glass cuts my skin
fills it in the same of a fertility star
drowning it so deep
can't think or breathe

Crying red
tears to die is to live
to live is to die
crying red
tears to die is to live
to live is to die

maybe I should go with my natural instinct
with the cracked face and decaying veins
knife so sharp and so slick the wrist I slit
but I don't want to do this anymore

Crying red
tears to die is to live
to live is to die
crying red
tears to die is to live
to live is to die

I don't (I don't)
want to (want to)
do this (do this)
over again
I don't (I don't)
need to (need to)
do this (do this)
over again


here we are
hear we are
fire burning in my heart
hurting everytime I breath
pushing and I
I can't stand this
I can't stand this
stand this


Crying red
tears to die is to live
to live is to die
crying red
tears to die is to live
to live is to die

Author notes

Crying Red First song off Borderline (my bands) new cd Better luck tomorrow

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  • XXLetMeBleedxX
    March 17, 2009
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    awsome

    wow awsome poem you should write me i am gonna right now lol


  • Commonsuicide
    March 7, 2009

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    I love this. I fucking love this. I don't know how you do it but there is something when you write everyone can relate to it evern if they have never gone through it. So very excellent.

    "maybe I should go with my natural instinct
    with the cracked face and decaying veins
    knife so sharp and so slick the wrist I slit
    but I don't want to do this anymore"

    Coming out of the dark and entering the light here. Very Very good.

    "here we are
    hear we are
    fire burning in my heart
    hurting everytime I breath
    pushing and I
    I can't stand this
    I can't stand this
    stand this"

    Getting sick and tired of the shit here. Very excellent. I enjoyed it.

    Johnny