I give life, you give life,
yet we can destroy each other.
I kill, you kill,
yet we should not kill each other.
I love my family, you love your family.
I'd kill for my family, you'd kill for your family.
I follow my nose, you follow your ???
The nose knows, not sure about you...
I am a protector, you are a protector.
We provide and protect at great lengths sometimes,
I am a predator, you are a predator.
I'd like to direct your attention back to "I kill, you kill" at this time;
I am intelligent, you are intelligent.
At this point I'd like to direct your attention back to "The nose knows" phrase.
Lets stay blessed and peaceful.
Let's commune together.
Let's address our needs
and realize we are not pure enemies.
Remember the old adage-
"Dog is mans best friend",
and recall your feelings while we are slain by man!
Love conquers, hate destroys,
ignorance can kill.
Let's not be ignorant -
Lets be blessed!
Signed-
The Wolf ~
Author notes
A contest entry
- Relations by Palas Kumar Ray.
800 points, ended September 12, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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We are very right in our own perspective.We are equally good and equally bad depending on our mutual co-relation.Time and place also do matter to decide how we become to each other.This is we to decide how we relate to each other.This is a very deep thoughtful poem on relation.Thanking you for entering this poem in my contest I wish you all the best.
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Nice concept. Having it from the wolf's outlook made it intriguing. The lines:
"You think the only people who are people
Are the people who look and think like you
But if you walk the footsteps of a stranger
You'll learn things you never knew you never knew"
from Pochantas come to mind. Thank you for your entry. -
Very sage advise
if we followed your advise, we would find our world much improved, I liked the way the piece flowed, testament and reminder, yes this is very good indeed
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This is an awesome poem. It was very informative. I loved the way you ended it too. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest
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nice
I like the Meaning of this Peice, Please read mine & let me know what you think. I beleive we're along the same lines here/////~ -
Wonderful write and imagery, piece within the hunters or hunted. Blessings.
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I really like your POV here, nice job!
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well written! To the point and effective. I love how you chose to center the poem around comparison.
Thank you for entering -
good write!
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Thumbs up.
This is nice...Vaguely nice--and so I can connect it to a lot of things.
Good one! Keep writing.
- Adelaine
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intersting write
very well thought out and written
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This is great! I love it! You took those prompts and did a great job with them! Wow! I love how you wrote this, very strong! Great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
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thanks! you're the first one to combine two of the prompts into one. and you used two that i never would have thought to combine...good job!!
i love you poem =) -
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked.
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