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the mystery of an empty home

in the attic of my mothers house
i found an empty bird cage,
waiting for something.
i peaked inside it
wondering who left it there
and why it was so sad
as i opened its little golden door.

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i'm not sure what to think of this
peace to all ~flight

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  • acoustical
    March 2

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    maybe its me but
    the last lines are kind of cliche? i dunno. they don't do it for me.
    but i like the images.


    • flight
      March 2
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      yea, maybe that's it. i'm just not sure what to do with it.
      peace to all ~flight