Succulent surrender
lavishly penetrates
essence...
as siphoning seduction
of opulent obsessions
arouses fury to outburst
a screech of ultimate ecstasy
only remains~
Author notes
Picture:http://billybofh.deviantart.com/art/The-bliss-of-submission-61654454
The_bliss_of_submission_by_billybofh
20 to 40 words
In a list
A contest entry
- Sensual/Adult Quickie by PerfectImperfection.
700 points, ended March 3, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Outstanding
Wow! This poem captures all the fascination of a vampires kiss- the ultimate submission. The imagery -as always in your poetry- is creative and original. This is a dark and haunting poem that is both sensual and refined. Congratulations on the gold trophy.
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Thank you for always leaving such a wonderful comment on my poetry!I am so delighted you enjoyed and thank you for the congratulations also! I really enjoyed writing this for the contest!
Linda
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Well written piece. It is almost like an interlude to a far greater story of forbidden love. I truly enjoyed it. Congratulations on the gold. It was well deserved.
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment and for the congrats too!! I am so delighted you enjoyed!! Thank you!!
Jazzy
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A Grandious Piece
this piece had me after the very first line. Truly stunning on how impactful your piece is and after finishing the read of the piece, how much I wanted to be almost bitten a little deeper into surrender.
Well worthy of the gold trophy.
Keep the ink flowing!
-Ninth Poet
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Thank you sir poet for such a lovely compliment... I am enojoying the fact that the motivation behind my words did have an impact
being you wanted to be bitten after reading..
WOW, great compliment!
Thank you
Jazzy
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Congradulation
so it tis, sweet surrender, as the strong also affected by love. You do have it going on within this write. Enjoy.
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lol Thank you Lonewolf for the wonderful contest and congratulations!!
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LORDY !
There is LIFE in this gal ! Amazing, the sensuality you evoke with one short poem. I am totally in awe of the command you possess over words. No one else I know can wield them as absolutes with the outcome you achieve. If you are wondering ... I like this write!
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lol Thank you Sam for the compliment, so glad you enjoyed this one, though sinister in its act... a bit off the cuff for me and one that I enjoyed too..lol
Have a wonderful day!! And thanks
Linda
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Well done the Gold and worth every ounce-
sent shivers down my creaky spine this!
Hilly xxx
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lol Creaky spine.. thanks Hilly for the delightful comment and for the giggles.. Glad I could give ya some shivers!!
Linda
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Oh wow!!! This is an amazing take on the prompt here, and right up the poetic alley I was drifting along lol. Very well spoken in so few words. Thank you for your entry
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Awww thank you for the beautiful award and inspiring prompt! lol I wasn't quite sure if it would fly or ... lol bite ya enough
Thank you
Jazzy
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<--what? everyone else is doing it...
great piece! soo...succulent! ..lol
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lol Yeah we might as well join in on the fun right??? lol
Thank you for the wonderful comment
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I wants to hear that screech
this just ups and s ya ... love it, good luck
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lol Well???????I'm waiting....zzzzzzzzzzzzz lol Thank you for the compliment and the virtual nibble lol right back at ya...lol
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Whoa!
Your poem is perfect for the pic~!
"Succulent surrender "
You can write anything with perfection, bff
Lynda
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You are always so sweet with your comments my dearest bff..so here is one for you too.. although I think someome may have beat me to that?? hee hee
Jazzy
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