Fine aura of untouched divinity
cultivated into ornamental beauty.
Blossoming brilliance bites
fiercely into angry frost,
conquering my verdant forest.
Tears ravage my face:
why did you vanish in winter?
Author notes
Prompt: Magnolia
30 Words exxxxactly (i hope 
)
please take time to try and uncover this one...
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Comments
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Thanks so much for entering.
[if you end up in the finals I will comment better]
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wow.. so much inner beauty
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A fitting tribute to beauty
I like the 'angry frost' notion preceded by 'bites'...great linkage of imagery here.
An enjoyable trip into your mind's poetic eye. Well done!
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Short and brilliant. The word choic is simply fantastic and captivating. Well done!
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wow
enchanting its very lovely!
Forever and always,
eclipser18
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this is beautiful.
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such a great write;; short but still amazing
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Mmmmm double rewards thats like a double chokolate brownie
This is really a lovely piece. It's like flowers but it's also like love like life cycles and how even love or relationships are born to be disiduous. I really like your word choices, they're very visual and full spectrum from blossoming to biting untouched to conquered, yummm. i love it ending on the question too.
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This is a great write, good luck in the contest!!!!
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Haha this is cute. I like the description of a tree.
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Wow, this is so beautiful! Having it so short is what makes it so amazing.
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