dear my only friend
you have come back to me ....
seen me waiting and flown back....
to you i owe my life...
my dearest bird....
you have not only given me life
but have given me hope for a better tomorrow
a better yesterday and a better today ....
you have come back to me ....
seen me waiting and flown back ....
to you i owe my life....
my dearest bird....
Today i gave my last sweet
to some kid who was crying
the look on their face , gave me the thing i wanted most
the look of pure happiness
the look so many of us fake .
you have come back to me ....
seen me waiting and flown back ....
to you i own my life....
my dearest bird ....
i understand now , why you left .
to make me realize the power
each one has on another
so thank you dear friend .
So how are you ?
Author notes
the picture sums it up really .
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A contest entry
- PICTURE PROMPT by Sandygram.
900 points, ended March 15, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MAKE ME LAUGH i really need a good laugh i've had a bad month by clara wilson-nelson.
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Comments
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Awesome! I loved it! The part with the kid and the candy, just great. I really wish I was better at commenting, so I could tell how good I really thought this was.
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this is simple yet so beautiful!! great write for the picture
xx
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This is a captivating piece. I love these lines:
...the look of pure happiness
the look so many of us fake...
Brilliant!
Nela -
Powerful writing here....lovely Presentation as well -
The ONLY thing I would suggest, is left-align......as it would read better IMO -
Other than that....lovely work....thank you for sharing this Month -
Blessings,
Bear -
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lovley write.
love the picture you have to go with it. -
good write
this is a very good writ it jut doesn't fit the contest i love te write tanks for entring
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Hello, I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for talking the time to enter. Best of luck in the contest. You take care, Sandy
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Cool. It's almost like a song, in the way you repeat the one part. I like it nice job
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Nice write
Good take on the pic. I liked the part about 'giving your last sweet to some kid and the look on his face.
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