Dead,
That's my heart,
With every dream,
Feeling,
Emotion,
I stare through blank eyes,
Eyes that no longer blaze,
I've bled,
Till there is no more,
I cried,
But there is no more,
My soul,
Blackened,
Dead to everything it feels,
Every emotion lost,
Every sense deafened,
I'm pushed over the edge,
Waiting,
Uncaringly,
To hit the bottom,
I'm now driven to the point,
Where I just don't care,
To the point,
Where you can just do what you want,
Cause I can't feel anything anymore,
So no more heart break,
Just an ache,
Where my dead heart,
Used to lie.......
i dont know this may be my last write until i can feel again......
Comments
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sad
sad but very touching! beautiful!
Forever and always,
Hannah
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awe this is really sad... but I know the feeling I wish someone could feel that feeling
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i really like it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo musch that is how much i like it!
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i understand what it's like to be unable to feel. i understand what it means to feel like this poem expresses. i hate to know that others feel as i have felt and do feel. it's difficult. i think it's called "flat" cause that's what they kept writing on my intake stuff at the mental hospital. i think u've written well here and i hope you can find the emotion to write again.
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