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What Do You Expect

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What is it you want

what do you expect of me

sometimes you want me to hold you close

and other times you want to be free

 

I guess I just stay confused

on which one of the two

maybe we could just be friends

do you really think that would do

 

I know you are a loner

and need a lot of private time

I can respect and grant your wishes

if you'll do the same for mine

 

you'll always be dear in my heart

and constantly stay on my mind

I never intended to hurt you love

I'd rather just stay behind

 

Tell me darlin'. what do you expect?

 

 

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  • chills gold member
    March 14

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    I had this exact same experience - he was very bad at making himself understood. However, he is but a baby and I am an old lady so WHAT did I expect?? Oh, but the conversation was so very beautiful... Thanks for making me think about him again. Hey ho. I hate love actually! It's hard work and often the pay is rubbish! xx

    • amysticwriter silver member
      March 14
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      I'm beginning to believe your last line says it all...where did all the good men go?...


  • Majija
    March 7

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    I like this poem. It really shows how important communication is, so you don't have to guess the expectations other have to you... so you don't get so confused and kind of lonely too.

    • Thank you for commenting, communication is important regardless of feelings...silence will eat away at your insides...


  • rbruce gold member
    March 2

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    Questions always being asked, to or not to. Very well thought out and written. Bravo! Good luck in the contest

  • know what you mean
    just wanted to drop you a note I'm here if you need me.
    Vent away
    Roses to you

    Teresa


  • arafura gold member
    March 2
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    I like this. Very well written indeed my friend. Good luck in the contest!

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