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- I Thought Wrong Dad -

I remember the day
you sent me back here
I remember clearly
What you had whispered in my ear

'I love you and I will call often'

I stepped on the train
Turned my head
And looked away
You had gone dad!!

I thought you might have stayed until the train pulled away
I thought you might have waved
I thought you might have even shed a tear

I THOUGHT WRONG ... you didn't care

I thought things might have changed
I thought we might have kept in touch
I thought i was your daughter dad!!

YET AGAIN.... I THOUGHT WRONG...

I thought maybe things could have changed
I thought that  at some point i might have forgave you
I thought that I could push these memories to the back of my head

I STILL THOUGHT WRONG...

You've gave me the choice to see you again
You've put it all onto me after all these years

I'm not sure whether I'm strong  enough to face you dad
Its been so long and I'm so god damn scared
I don't think i can dad...

You hurt me so much, for so long... you don't understand dad

Dad??

I'm not up to making the choice yet
Maybe you will understand
Maybe you wont

I'm not quite sure







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  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    August 4

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    I realy liked this piece. It was really good! WOW! BRAVO! such great emotions in this piece, as well as phenomenal imagery. WOW! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • Emerald-Spirit
    April 20
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    This captured my mind. I can imagine how you feel. Great piece. Xds-gX


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 18

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    this is so very sad. thank you for having the courage to post it here and for sharing this with me. viyanna rosemarie

  • ybarradf
    March 14

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    powerful

    wow some powerful stuff goin on. its like i can feel all those years of emotion that was built up inside of you. thank you for sharing.


  • Strawberry Wolf
    March 14
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    I can relate, in a way. But I know the feeling. Great work. Keep writing. Your great at it.


  • Broken Life
    March 14
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    Amazing in everyway


  • ToxicBunny
    March 14
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    so deep, i like it


  • rawritstreasure
    March 13
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    i love this!!!
    =]
    my favorite


  • xXemo-teddybearXx
    March 7

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    amazing
    i loved it
    thats all i can say
    fantastic write
    thankyou for entering my contest
    goodluck
    even though you dont need it
    xXalyXx
    his emo teddybear


  • tellnotalesxx
    March 5

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    AWWWWWW THiiS iiS SOO0O SAD YETT SO0 BEAUTiiFUL iiN A UNiiQUEE WAYYY. GREATT WRiiTE AND GREAT WAYY 0F EXPRESSiiNG Y0URSELFF. ^^)
    -MELiiJELii

  • Toriiluv
    March 3
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    I love this poem, I can relate to this 100%
    very very good =]

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