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Call of Service(working on it)

Deep in darkness I sit
waiting for the new hatch
warriors of another time
reborn to service

I send out in air
beaconing energy from my heart
seeking a dragon soul
in earth's aura

Suddenly it comes
quickly it moves to me
a cloud of unseen power
a dragon message comes

Over me electric it bursts
golden sparks explode all around
covers me in a healing hue
my knight has found me

I feel his power embrace me
warm tingles of new senses
gently feel me being
we know each other...

Welcome Young Flame to the Path...


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  • Draig aine gold member
    March 19
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    very cool

    want more


  • sunoir
    March 19

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    I agree the beginnings of a saga..loved how you left it, "Welcome Young Flame to the Path...", as a conveyance to a new chapter. Enjoyed kudos

  • There's a whole world here, created in such a vivid way.

    Enjoyed your write.