Zortan’s greatest warlorde he, invulnerable to every weapon
Blest with powers from far off star, stellar spores to kill and deaden
His crusade and reign of fear to burn the earth and make it bow
In rule of tyrant anger’s force and depth’s of vilest cruel vow
No aircraft, tank or cannon’s roar can fell the mighty beast
As fast he moves upon his prey, the mighty and the least
His blood is cold, his heart a stone, his eyes are dead and grey
And nothing stands against his wrath, this is the judgement day
As buildings crumble at his feet and cries turn into screams
He laughs so coldly at their fate and tramples all their dreams
Then lo, what picture comes to sight, two lovers locked embrace
Boy hopes to save his darling girl and Bjvhyxmc to face
His voice is cutting, lips are cruel as carefully he decides
To crush them underfoot beneath the vibro yak he rides
But nothing moves, his mount is still, where did his anger go?
For grief is written on his face and tears begin to flow
Her face the same, the eyes he knew, the one who shunned his love
For being ugly, though not his fault, she, still his turtle dove
And in his pain a mighty roar came from his broken heart
Revenge was not enough it seems for memories to depart
Then thrusting his weapon into his side he groaned in soft release
And left his love, and left the world to build again in peace
Author notes
I chose villan option
5.The ugly Bj'vhyxmc Warlorde (Bj'vhyxmc-Warlorde, Bj'vhyxmcwarlorde, Warlorde Bj'vhyxmc, Warlorde-Bj'vhyxmc, Warlordebj'vhyxmc)
Power(s): Invulnerability
Source of powers: Extra-terrestrial divine intervention
Weapon: Stellar Spores
Transportation: Vibro Yak
Love should always conquer especially on Valentine's day!
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Comments
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Aww this is wonderful. Sad but wonderful! You did some great rhymming in this too. Excellent imagery throughout. Thanks so much for your entry.
Gaylene
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I'm thrilled you like it. It's my very first superhero type poem! lol
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I really like this, it has a clever twist at the end! And the rhyme was impeciable! Well done!
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So glad you liked it! Thank you for your lovely words. It was fun to write as I love fantasy.
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Love it
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Thank you for your lovely comments.
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