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Perpetuation




i.

~Fragments ~


Baby’s breath sighs
in delicate dreams
as Spring whispers
upon the wind;
tenderly quilting  
sweet fragrance
into tears
of memories




ii.

~Of Existence~


Minor alterations
thought to sow
a green harvest,
yet meddling weeds
supersede upon an
unused rocker;
maturing its
fruitless vines



iii.

~Still Echo~


Hollow attempts
to resonate Eden’s chimes
beneath slumbering snow
go silent,
as a silver halo
cascades
into fertile earth;
breathing life

into a blanket
once again~

 

 




Author notes

As per the rules of Danna's contest, you will be required to write 3 poems within the 1 entry.
All 3 must utilise the same theme, however each must be explored through pre nominated metaphors.
1. A Scrapbook
2. A Fault Line
3. A Mirror

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  • poet2angels gold member
    April 7

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    whoo hoo bff!
    Great job..I told ya this was a winner!!!

    Lynda


  • Errant Panther
    April 7

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    lovely airiness in the words that gives a feeling of floating with the emotions you express on the breeze. some stunning phrases make this a joy to read, the individual titles reading like a sentence when combined was also a nice touch to create unity between each separate piece. well done and best wishes.


    • jasminerose
      April 11
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      Thank you dear Poet for the very lovely compliment and for the amazing award you have graced my poem with! I sooooo appreciate it!!!
      Jazzy

  • poet2angels gold member
    March 3
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    Amazing

    I love this...It brings to my heart joyous thoughts of angel babies (yours)

    "as a silver halo
    cascades
    into fertile earth;
    breathing life

    into a blanket
    once again~"

    Beautiful ...SO touching....As a Mother, I adore it even more...

    Great job bff

    Lynda


  • Liquid memories
    March 3

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    Ah yes, life moves on with us or without us. I could relate to the items you wrote about, as I lived the country farm life, weeds and other things seem to grow anywheres or place.Thanks , for sharing.


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    March 2

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    Wow ...this is awesome. what imagery!...I would pull out some quoted lines that stood out..but the entire piece stands out and I love every word...Don't change a thing!!!




  • Carolina Moon gold member
    March 2

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    Gorgeous as per your usual my friend. Absolutely a breathtaking write! I wish you all the best.

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