Birthday
Mommy, Mommy, it's my birthday.
I get cake and ice cream today.
Friends come over and we can play.
Wake up Mommy. It's my birthday.
Mommy, Mommy. I got ice cream.
Never mind your super good dream.
Found the cake. I'm eating, munching.
Candy. Candy. Crunching, crunching.
Drinking soda. Eating, eating.
Eating, eating, eating, eating.
Mommy, Mommy, lots of chocolate.
Got a Twinkie in my pocket.
Eating, drinking. HAPPY BIRTHDAY
To me, happy happy birthday.
Mommy. Mommy, won't you party?
Up and at 'em. Party hearty.
Rise and shine and smell the coffee
That I made and drank with toffee.
Mommy, Mommy, better come quick.
Made a mess. I think I got sick.
Author notes
Happy Birthday Doc.
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday, Dr. Suess by Judith Chandler.
700 points, ended March 3, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is nice and the ending is pretty typical after eating, eating, eating.
Thanks for submitting this entry and celebrating Dr. S's birthday party. -
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Thank you.
I have made a large site of stuff for kids and never recieve any feedback from it. I never have any notion of whether I'm on the right track or not. I do like writing it though.
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