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I Stand

I stand the night in light and love
I am the west wind that caress tenderly
Brushes every so softy upon your flesh
And as the rising sun in the east
Pours morning warmth upon your lips
Beloved the North Star leads you

Straight and true to my waiting lips
As the full moon rising renewed
Her light showering you with my love
As a spirit of life, love, light
My hands of passion will
Fill your heart with waves of desire

In this world I love you as no other
Heart aflutter longing to be your lover

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  • Draig aine gold member
    March 5
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    shivers

    what an enchanting write


  • albymyheart gold member
    March 3

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    Love, nature and spirituality all blend here into one beautiful poem. Very nice, best of luck in the contest...alby


  • Kathraina silver member
    March 2

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    Lovely words in this piece.
    Wonderful imagery and flow.
    Marvelous piece!
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    ♥ Kathraina


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 2

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    Wow, who wouldn't want you to be their lover after reading this? Exquisite write, filled with passion and adoration.


  • azlyn gold member
    March 2

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    Beautiful visions...so filled with love and wonder.



  • GothicFyre
    March 2

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    Gorgeous, gorgeous and oh yeah - GORGEOUS! no joke, really lovely lines and easy flow. Thanks for writing it!

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