I see the ocean in your eyes
Hear love on your breath
Feel us falling into nothing
Yet nothing is our everything
One kiss and i'm free
One day with you and it's...
memories
A contest entry
- Love by MommaFallenAngel.
400 points, ended March 2, 2009, 11 entries
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If I had to sum up this poem in one word, it would be:
Your poetry and songs have always been good. You always know how to pour out your emotions and that's what is so special about them. Keep up the great work. kahy
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that's so sweet i love it!!!!
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I loved this good job
good luck dearie -
Wow this poem made me feel tingly inside I love it
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Short but sweet makes you feel emotions that's what a poem should be.
Kudos
Dakotah
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