Who is Jeff?
Jeff is who?
Has he gone deaf,
or to the zoo?
Where is he?
he is where?
I cannot see
him over there.
I saw Jeff
Upon AP
He looked quite deaf
And drank some tea
I like Jeff
Jeff is me!
Though I'm not deaf
I do like tea!
Author notes
Maybe not quite Dr Seuss-like.
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday, Dr. Suess by Judith Chandler.
700 points, ended March 3, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me honestly what you think, good or bad.
Comments
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Lol it reminds me of dr, suess, congrats on the silver trophie well desuvred, Keep writting.
~ Chelsey -
congratulations!
Jeff is dressed
in a paisley vest
and so his bum
doesn’t freeze,
wide wale cords
to accept his awards
and a hanky
in case he should sneeze.
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Jeff is fun
he has to be
Jeff's the one
who likes his tea
scones with cream
and strawberry jam
Jeff's smile will beam
he's one strange man!!!!
A great piece Jeff and one that should do well
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Brilliantly Done:
I love it.
You could write anything.
I hope you do well in the contest.
This poem was--wow!
It really captured my attention, and I just loved the way you worded it.
Nice job mate.
Evemauy
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Yes it's Jeff
Jeff is who
When i read it
then i knew
Knew the poet
with the pen
knew it now
and knew it then
Knew the style
knew the form
knew his verse
would cause a storm
knew the words
that he would speak
knew that they
would be unique
knew at once
when it was read
knew it would
stay in my head
Knew it would
be quite a treat
knew it was
the one to beat
knew that it
would be the best
know it will
win this contest
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Jeff is silly
silly Jeff
willy nilly
he's not deaf
Drinks his tea
his tea is Hilly
Jeff's not deaf
just a bit silly.
Bumps
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Lookey Here
Lookey here
I see Jeff
Check his ear
Now is Jeff deaf?
He's not deaf
Not silly he
In his ear
He spilt some tea
It's run out now
On his vest
Never mind that
Jeff is best
Clap for Jeff now
He's a poet
Everything he writes
Does show it -
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Thanks a lot now I know it was only tea I feel a lot better
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Don't expect me to say anything
about the feeling-wetter/better thing. Nope. Not me. Not a peep. I'm going to sleep now. Good-night.
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This is just wonderful! I love it I think you could easily put Seuss out of business
Best wishes in the contest.
Gaylene
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Hmm this is interesting. Made me think just who the heck am I? Well I am me and/that is that/if you don't like that/I will lay you flat. Now those lines are really silly. Take care and keep writing.
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I can see a Who Jeff in this
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i love it .perfect!!
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This is not bad, Jeff is who,
bad it is not, I say
Jeff is who can write it too
Sam I am plays this way
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Nice one, Jeff! Dr. S. would like it.
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Hehehe, stark raving bonkers, got a ceckle out of me anyway.
Good luck in the contest.
Floorboards.
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