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Dedication.

With words that do no justice,
I try my hardest to remember you.
And with a heart still feeling no emotion,
I try to find the courage to let you go.
I can’t seem to take reality in,
Yet there’s an emptiness inside.

It chews and twists and tells my mind,
That I should feel a seething pain;
Still, no worthy wording fills my page,
And frustration eats at my temper.

With words that do you no justice,
I try to describe you to the unfortunate listener,
Who never had the pleasure of your company.
And with a numbness that creeps through my veins,
I lay awake and talk to God.

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  • Eusebius
    June 18

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    Excellent

    Oh, this IS excellent! A profound write, extremely well done in getting across a difficult and comlex series of emotions! bravo!


  • kristian 28
    June 11

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    i like this ,it speaks loud,even though it´s as simple as can be ,in my opinion it´s good even great work,applause