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Musings of a Beholder

See how my outer layer strikes you so fair,
My love?

Our shells entwined
And your soul's sweet air
Caress the beauty
That's rooted there.

Author notes

Yeah, it's weird, and yes, it's really short.

Oh well. You'll all live.

Inspirational picture credit to: http://d-e-v-i.deviantart.com/art/Beauty-and-Pride-83617462

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  • Sandygram silver member
    March 15, 2009

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    Hello, I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for talking the time to enter. Best of luck in the contest. You take care, Sandy