I’m desolate
my deeds
couldn't reach clouds
where you live.
Author notes
10 words
A contest entry
- 10 Words of by HopelessScribbles.
575 points, ended March 3, 20 entries
Silver trophy winner
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ahhhhh well written with thoughtfulness, that is quite high to reach. Thanks for sharing.
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Always amazing what you are inspired to share. Blessings.
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aw wow this so powerful and deep good luck in the contest
maralisa
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volumes said with very few words
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Ah,,,,the pain and longing.....is alot here....Well written brother...
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Deep! you said soooooo much with those few words! Wow! You did great on this one! Love it!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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wow, this is sad but yet it is heard quite well, thank you for this entry, good luck...MM
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