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{Just An Obsession;}


[forgive]
                  me
                            f
o
  r
h.a.t.i.n.g    {you}

it's just
an o*b*s*e*s*s*i*o*n

that i c^a^n^n^o^t
c`o`n`t`r`o`l.

f~o~r~g~i~v~e
          m=e
for
                  w_i_s_h_i_n_g

you
                          w-e-r-e
          .
      .
      .
d:e;a.ddd



                                  itsjustanobsession.

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  • Babiee.Bunniee
    March 2, 2009
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    hahaha. LOVE IT
    AmAz to the ing. Keep it up juggalo MCL

    Nessa


  • keybladekitty gold member
    March 2, 2009
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    I really like this. It's short but has a powerful message.


  • xxSerendipityxx
    March 2, 2009
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    I really like this, you did a great job!


  • Winter Wolf gold member
    March 2, 2009

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    I really like this poem. Such powerful emotion and I love the way you wrote this. I feel this way about someone so I can relate so well thanks for sharing.

    - Maria ♣