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Still I cry for you

Still I cry for you,
Knowing your so far away,
we had our fights but we worked them out,
We were best friends and we still are,
I fell in love with you,
but now its just friend love,
I still cry for you cause all the pain your going through,
I care so much for you,
can you see,
When we got to our big fight I thought I could quit talking to you,
but I couldn't,
you were the only one I could talk to,
and I threw you away like you were nothing,
I am so sorry I put you threw misrey,
Tears well up,
cause still I cry for you,
hoping you will forgive me and when you did,
the tears stopped for a little while,
Until,
You are having a friend leaving to go to the army,
and Still I cry for you,
and by now you should know why,
cause I am your friend,
thats why,
Still I cry for you!

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  • The Jester
    March 2
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    this is amazeing
    oh my god this is the best thing i have ever read
    great write


  • Triami Arack
    March 2
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    Quite an excellent read, I can really feel your emotion in this poem. Nice write.