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Musically Broken

The more her heart breaks
the louder her music plays
and for now she turns the volume
and almost blows the headphones

What do you think yall?

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  • SimplyNoodle
    March 2, 2009
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    Hmmm, This paints a wierd picture in my mind, yet a very clear one, Good job.
    ~ Chelsey