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when you feel like crying come cry with me [edited a little but needs more work]

i, know, that everything we did wasn't all for granite.
and you, you sacrifice yourself to make it all seem like magic.
when will you calm down this isn't how its supposed to be!
and when you feel like crying come cry with me

and when it all seem its gonna fall
can't save yourself from lyin
and when you think your gonna die,don't look down.
cause it will all come  crashin, on you  and your dreams.
but as you know, i love you and the way you make me feel
too bad; none of this is real.

So sad, and how your words come out like toothpaste,
so what? you think that life is just a race? (to see who comes first)
thats so horrible unlike the flawlessness of. your. face!
but turn around princess cause your kingdom is at stake.

and when it all seems its gonna fall,
can't save yourself from lyin
and when you think your gonna die,don't look down.
cause it will all come  crashin, on you  and your dreams.
but as you know, i love you and the way you make me feel
too bad; none of this is real.

*and when you want to create your life upon a rock its gonna tip over
and you are gonna fall! feel the ocean beneath your feet and the wind in your hair and
yell that you don't care!!!!

so when, when  it all seem its gonna fall
can't save yourself from laughter
and when you think your gonna live you can catch the dreams your after .
and it all come crashin, on you  and your dreams.
but as you can tell this isn't what it seems, this is me.



and when it all seem its gonna fall
can't save yourself from lyin
and when you think your gonna die,don't look down.
cause it will all come down crash in, on you  and your dreams.
but as you know, i love you and the way you make me feel
too bad none of this is real.
too bad none of this is real
and this is how i feel

crashing; and burnin again,
you breathe and take one step back and 3 steps forward,
just begin the dream.but then again this is life what are ya gonna do
to make it right? unless you fall, tonight.....

"heartbroken" is just the beginning....

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  • Mr.Purple69
    March 11

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    Very emotional

    I can really relate to what you're feeling. but anyways, this is REALLY well written. I can't even follow everything that's happening because there is so much emotion and imagery that is hard to understand. Good job