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Don't Cry

Please don't cry
I can't stand the tears in your eyes
I love you so much
but I don't have a choice to go
please wait here
someday I'll be back
to live here forever
and never leave your arms
but for now keep me close
I gave you my heart
Just promise to hold it close
if ever you feel like your slipping away
just know that I love you more than anything

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  • SimplySonnets gold member
    June 29

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    I like your poem, the appeal for patience and loyalty usually sends thoughts of control in love affairs, through my mind, your appeal to the emotions is done in simple yet powerful diction, well written, thank you.


  • mcrfan322
    March 5

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    WOW.. this poem is amazing... i love the emotion in here... you wrote an exelent poem (like always)... LOL... i so cant wait to read your next poem... keep up the heart felt poems and yeah good job... ...LOL...


  • Babiee.Bunniee
    March 3

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    Wow...

    sis you are truly an amazing writer. I love this one, but of course I love most of your work