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Pretend

save me from this pain i feel.
i want to be free.
i want love to be real.
my heart beats for you.. its in your hands.
but you just set it down and walk away.
why can i not be good enough?
i want you.
i want your love.
i beg for you.. and you ignore my pleed.
... if i cant have you.. then lets play pretend.
please catch my tears.. before they hit the ground..
please close these broken veins.. before my hope bleeds out.
i want to be happy..
i want to love agian.
please come back to me..
even if its all just pretend.

something new also.. i could use the advice :)

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  • ill love you for reall.
    and ill make you happy

    babe these are fantastic

  • safe-haven
    March 11

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    this was good. really deep. i like the part where it says "please close these brokem veins..before my hope bleeds out." thats a really good line


  • Bombshell
    March 3
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    hey candice, its katelyne this poems is so good but sad =[ily