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Masquerade Within

Missing image
Circlets of gold.
Eyes of azure.
Laugh of silver.

My perfect world
Covets,
Protects,
Nestles

Me nearer...
Nearer to it's depths.

It's dreams of insanity,
Hopes of madness.

Perfect happiness
Is only a disguise

For what is hidden within.

Never more.

No longer does it have my trust.
My faith,
My love.

Its seamless masquerade
Shattered
Beneath my gaze.

Ideals misplaced.
Perfection lost.
Joy betrayed.

I set apart my role
In this horrid play.

I cast aside the pearls
That bind me.

I break away from the serenity
All around me.

I live.

Author notes

Pic inspired: http://d-e-v-i.deviantart.com/art/Beauty-and-Pride-83617462

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  • Denerica
    May 8

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    Wow!

    And...how old are you, I would not have seen this coming from a 13 year old, excellent write, the words, the meaning behind it, goes great with the prompt...you are on you way dear poet! I hope your parents are proud, deserving of the HM! Blessings.


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 15

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    Hello, Lovely Words, I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for talking the time to enter. Best of luck in the contest. You take care, Sandy


  • my02U
    March 2

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    ho hum.

    Good! lol yayyy i liked the end...

    I set apart my role
    In this horrid play.
    I cast aside the pearls
    That bind me.
    I break away from the serenity
    All around me.
    I live.

    verrrry pretty and true!

    ummm, i think it's "ringlets", tho... sry!

    02u


  • DeadlyTurnip
    March 2

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    Oooh very pretty and inspirational, John Adams, I like it a lot

    The picture was cool, too.

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