Oh God
all the royal perceives
felicitated by you were my mentor,
even then I stumbled
until I traced you
by the unsure convictions of mine
landing the faith
irrespective of the senses I was gifted
to censor you by the inferences
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Abstract Poetry #34 - NOTHING - by The Cube.
500 points, ended March 4, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A great write! I love the religious abstract. Great style. Amazing way to describe the foundation of faith and our journey to finding it.
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Nice touch. This definitely was abstract, but left a decent foundation as what the reader should take away from it. Nicely done.
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Oddly different. I was not expecting a more religious touch in the contest, but as well, this is a great piece.
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Quite the abstract way to expound on God's greatness..With Him as our mentor, we do stumble, and are baffled by Him...I think of Job, who had to listen to God share, Were you there when I made the great leviathan of the sea?" And so the discourse went on....Job who was a righteous man, found himself so humbled, as should we, and myself by GOD!...You always help us appreciate HIM more! Thank you dear friend for this write...A good abstract write!
penning! 
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God is Awesome!
You have accurately captured the stumbles we go through while finding our way back to our Father; and, it is so true that Faith is what finally gets us where we ought to be at all times. This is wonderfully penned, my darling friend, and should take the GOLD!
Much luv & hugs, BonQ
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