Ageless and timeless, great beauty,
carried with grace and dignity,
from within burns an ethereal quality,
suffusing her with eternal glow..
In her mind lay countless lives,
carrying her line's memories uncounted,
they will come to her and give welcome,
when her last breath is expelled..
Then she will join with all of them,
sisters, daughters, mothers,
and they shall wait in golden silence,
for the one who shall unlock the door..
For if the human race is to survive,
soon a rebirth must take place,
a step up the ladder must be taken
to release evolutions next big leap..
She is the key, born to raise us up,
opening our minds like a glorious flower,
petals of knowledge springing forth,
forever changing our destinies..
Author notes
Background by me-please credit if used-thank you..
A contest entry
- Anything & Everything for GOLD!! by Hebz.
400 points, ended June 21, 221 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes, it is perfect, I love it so so so much & it's a finalist now
Thnx for entering & Best of Luck
GloriousGift
Hebz -
WOW WOW ... perfect... love the piece & BG...
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I think your words and background are magnificent. Such beauty and delicate fantacism in both. So pleasing and refreshing.
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A Beautiful Thought
This is a very consistently written piece . Each verse is of equal quality . A very full and tightly
written work . I was soothed by the wording and
pleased by its meaning . I would add rhythm and rhyme to make it flow better if I had to change it.
The title , first line , and last line are just fine .
Greenwolfe 1962
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Future woman -- looks much the same as today's woman and as yesterday's woman and that is great by me. A beautiful write
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hey gotta say that I love the background. Great job with that pick. She reminds me of a greek goddess or even the statue of liberty when actually alive and not a big building. Full of pride. Wonderful write because it goes right along with the poem. Great choice of words. Great picture. Wonderful as always. Thanks for sharing this with us!
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The view created here to look the splendor of her is really thoughtful and verstile in terms of its inpterpretations..love it..and thanks..
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Very empowering write. It's a beautiful message for every woman.
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beautiful, vivid, extraordinary! loved this.
Then she will join with all of them,
sisters, daughters, mothers,
and they shall wait in golden silence,
for the one who shall unlock the door..
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Stunning write ~ full of glorious splendour ~
very powerful and empowering
s Lib x x
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