Filtering through the clouds
the soft white light explodes
creating lovely shrouds
along such lonely roads
Luscious wings extend
to draw you safely in
to protect and to defend
hoping a new life to begin
Ride upon the wings
carefully toward the skies
listening to harp strings
keep striving for the prize
The Father sends his love
on rays wrung from on high
with the silent dove
causing us to sigh……
Fill us with desire
to sit at the foot of Your throne
we are rescued from the mire
never more to be alone
In a list
A contest entry
- PICTURE PROMPT XV - 20 ENTRIES by ShelleyA.
2000 points, ended March 10, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well well
another great poem of love and devtion....well done...p.s...what a job navigating your site wow. i'm exhausted with all this er er er oh what do you call it er oh WORK. yes thats it..lol...keep happy
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A very good write, message and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good imagery, flow, rhyme and tone. Very nice meter. Vivid descriptives. Lovely depth of feeling and expression of faith. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.
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Thanks
for your kind words and the beautiful silber trophy.
*Go with God* my Friend,
Valerie
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This is very beautiful and filled with hope.
Very well written. This fits the image
perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
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Such an inspirational piece here sweet soul!
Thanks for sharing here, I need all the love I can find. Peace, and stay sweet! 
Timothy
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