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storm

In the storm she waits
But to nothing does she see
All hope is fading

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this is one of my better haikus, that i have written.

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  • DesolatELifE
    March 12

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    It's a great haiku. I like this. Reminds me of waiting in the storm. Not for anything, just waiting.


  • skitza
    March 2
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    Good.