'Tis of thee, a country of glutony and greed
rapaciousness with dominance
land of plenty soon to be empty
must we really be bled dry?
Author notes
7. Speak Against the Government How much more can we give? America needs to restructure and keep it's jobs,people and money within. There comes a time you give so much your bled dry!
A contest entry
- A Four lines' ~Stanza~ to break the WALL of voilence by The.poet.of.hearts.
999 points, ended March 23, 13 entries
Honorable mention
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Good!
There's another contest going on right now that you should enter this in! I will send you the link...
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more Nicely penned.
I give 75 out of 100
~Lets See Where the Cradle Break~
and really sorry for Judging this late, I was having my Midterm Exams
Wish you all the best of Luck
Thanks for ENtering
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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Goggle the stimuli's bill pork if you have not all ready.
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