If only there was a time
where I could hold you again,
tell you not to worry,
that it'll all be okay,
that I'll always be here
and that I'll never leave you.
Just once more
I wish I could hold your hand
to know your still here,
that your real,
just to make myself happier.
I want to see your smile,
one last time,
just to know your happy,
that your alive and well,
just to make sure your not hurt
and that your living a better life than me.
A contest entry
- round contest number one (prewrite) by serenity silvermoon.
510 points, ended September 25, 111 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful!
This was so heartfelt.
So sweet and i could feel thoughts you felt comming through here.
a great job you did here.
-mandi

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ONE DAY MY DEAR YOU WILL!!!!!
Just keep that prayer close to your heart and it will come to be.
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aww sissy what a beautiful poem you have written here
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So touching and very heartfelt here, probably the most you have written here, just beyond love and words...


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Oh babygirl,
This is heartwrenching. One can feel your compassion in this one! You did a great job on it! WOW! Great work...
and love
Mommy


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