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Needing to know.

If only there was a time
where I could hold you again,
tell you not to worry,
that it'll all be okay,
that I'll always be here
and that I'll never leave you.

Just once more
I wish I could hold your hand
to know your still here,
that your real,
just to make myself happier.

I want to see your smile,
one last time,
just to know your happy,
that your alive and well,
just to make sure your not hurt
and that your living a better life than me.

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  • Beautiful!

    This was so heartfelt.
    So sweet and i could feel thoughts you felt comming through here.
    a great job you did here.
    -mandi


  • Puppydog gold member
    March 3

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    ONE DAY MY DEAR YOU WILL!!!!!

    Just keep that prayer close to your heart and it will come to be. 's

  • aww sissy what a beautiful poem you have written here


  • She burns
    March 2

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    So touching and very heartfelt here, probably the most you have written here, just beyond love and words...


  • StarEyes
    March 2

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    Oh babygirl,

    This is heartwrenching. One can feel your compassion in this one! You did a great job on it! WOW! Great work...

    and love

    Mommy

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